Comments to peers:
Matt,
After reading your post I can relate to your experiences because I too have lost a Grandmother. What I personally liked about your post was that it's not just some study or some little research it's real. You discuss your feelings and your thoughts about the end of your Grandmothers life and how it effected you and others and to me that takes a lot of will power and personal strength to share such deep parts about yourself. I love your insight that a person dying doesn't just effect the person it effects everyone around them, it's a very thoughtful realization that a lot of people for the most part I've noticed don't come to terms with. Overall great project, but as well check your spelling and punctuation before posting.
-Brendan.
Sam,
After reading your project I loved your set up of how after you visited the Hallmark that you connected it to various authors to back up your point and that is a great technique. But what really caught my eye in your post was your thoughts on the people inside of the Hallmark. The entire first paragraph which is what I'm referring where you describe the place as ornate and the people as not engaged as a happy person should be. I loved the way you made this observation so clearly. All of the people I know in my family see old folk's homes in such a different way but you describe it in the way it is suppose to be described and I have the same view's on them as you.
-Brendan
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